When bringing this piece to a close I decided it was looking a little too literal for me. So I made some changes--like slashing half of it off. Happy now.
Two little girls
trying to catch a breeze
under the shade of an old oak tree
in a lush garden
at a place in time
that kept them apart
long ago but not forgotten
still together
bonded by a shared wound
and courage.
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This is just beautiful, Peggy. It is charming and delightful. I can almost see them swinging right off the page.
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ReplyDeleteIt speaks a beautiful poem that they're enjoying the childhood and how they cherish it. When I see more your embodiery/stitches I fall in love with them more.
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