Last Fall I soaked a few cherry branches and stems in some of Manitou Spring's iron rich water*. I soaked some vintage cotton along with the branches and left them to soak for 48 hours. Then I wrapped the branches in the fabric and steamed them and let them to cure for a week. Upon unwrapping I immediately saw this landscape. This is all nature's doing (except for the sketch of the tree on the left.) Click on the image for a larger view.
There is still more ripping to do. In the foreground you'll notice a line of white stitching, It's covering up the resist mark made by a stem which gives a nice line in the landscape. The stitching, to me, just makes it too obvious and like I am trying to control the scene too much. Ripple marks in the water on the right, they are going too. The only stitch I really like is the tree. I think it provides a nice focal point and adds to the mood of the scene.
So I would love to hear your thoughts. Do you go by the less is more, or more is more line of thought. I think I use both approaches but I am getting better at discerning when it is best to use one over the other.
*Iron Spring water contains 13.30ppm (equals milligrams per liter) of iron. When you initially collect the water, it looks clear, but after settling for a few hours you can see red stuff floating around in it. GROSSSSSSSSSSSS. Which is why I dye with it and don't drink it.
Peggy, neither of those lines you mention bother me. I don't know what the piece looks like without them, but if you want to subtley draw the eye to the water and the ridge near the tree, you might simply try thread that's a) a bit finer and/or b) a colour that blends in more with the background...like a pale grey or grey-beige... Just a thought. :-)
ReplyDeleteThanks, Margaret. Excellent idea.
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